Please Critique My UC Personal Statement!

College Essays
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<p>I really need someone to critique my second personal statement. Apps are due soon and I really need to make sure this is perfected.</p>

<p>If you reply yes to this thread, I will PM you my second prompt and then you can give me honest criticism there. Thanks so much!</p>

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<p>i’ll give it a read! :smiley: give it a pm over!</p>

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<p>Yeah, I’ll read it! I give good feedback, so I’ll be sure to give you my best opinion.</p>

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<p>i’ll read it, although i’m no professional.(:</p>