Please critique my UChicago extended essay...

Colleges and Universities A-Z University of Chicago ✅
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<p>Hello,
Could current UChicago students critique my essay.
Thanks a bunch.</p>

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<p>Anyone???</p>

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<p>Bump please!</p>

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<p>I’d love to give you my feedback. PM it to me if you want.</p>