please critique! URGENT!!

<p>i have written the common app essay and i have drafted a supplement for uva and i'm half way writing uchicago's. and now, i need someone to read them!.. preferably someones. please!!</p>

<p>i need someone to at least read my main essay so that i can send it in to bu. so please! is anyone interested?</p>

<p>I'm willing to read it, but I'm an '09er, so...</p>

<p>I'm not applying to your schools, though, if that's any help.</p>

<p>anyone else interested? please!</p>

<p>I'm also applying to UVA, so pm me and I'll read them if you'd like.</p>

<p>i'll read them... i'm not appling to those schools. would you read mine?</p>