<p>Applying to college is bumming me out and I need help on my essay. I dunno, I'd give it to my english teacher but I don't really wan't to escalate our relationship to the point where she knows very personal things about me. So instead I'll bare my heart to a complete stranger! So tear it apart in hopes that it may one day be better. All suggestions will be considered and appreciated, Thanks in advance.</p>
<p>ill look at it, i just sent in my app today</p>
<p>anyone else?</p>
<p>ill check it out. pm it over</p>
<p>pm it...=]</p>
<p>Would love to read it, 09'er here as well, if you don't mind.</p>
<p>just sent my app for ed.
i can leer it.
pm me</p>
<p>Sure PM, and i'll respond promptly</p>
<p>Sure! I would love to read it. PM to me and I will give you some critiques on it.</p>
<p>Thanks everyone for responding, I'm sorry I was late I thought the thread had died.</p>
<p>sure ill read it</p>