please give me a critique of my common app essay

Colleges and Universities A-Z Harvard University
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<p>please give me a critique of my common app essay</p>

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<p>sure, just pm me. & happy holidays :)</p>

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<p>I will if you PM me.</p>

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<p>PM me please</p>

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<p>I'll do it if you still need readers</p>

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<p>giveee it to me</p>

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<p>pm meee to</p>

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<p>PM it to me :-)</p>

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<p>ok ill read it</p>

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<p>If you still need help, I'll be more than happy to read it for you. :)</p>

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<p>same with me</p>

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<p>I'll read it.</p>

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<p>pm me ;)***</p>

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<p>i'll do it.</p>

<p>i already got into harvard ed.</p>

<p>u can email it to me at: <a href="mailto:ibnzrokr@yahoo.com">ibnzrokr@yahoo.com</a></p>

<p>if anyone else wants me to read theirs, just email me!</p>

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<p>i got into harvard scea already and i'm def. willing to read anyone's essays, because i remember frantically trying to write them.</p>

<p>PM ME</p>