Please give me advice on my essay

College Essays
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<p>Here is the prompt: Please describe your interests and aspirations in engineering. What experiences have influenced you? (250 words)</p>

<p>I need help on making my essay more unique and appealing while cutting down the word count. I have a word count of 338! I will PM it to you if you are interested.</p>

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<p>PM with title/prompt. (Just so you know 338 is way too short.)</p>

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<p>Sure PM it over.</p>

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<p>Sure, PM me!</p>

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<p>bump 10char</p>

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<p>I am also doing engineering, so PM it</p>

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<p>Ok sent it. Anyone else?</p>

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<p>Yes, PM me</p>

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<p>Send it over yonder.</p>

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<p>bump 10char</p>

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<p>PM me with prompt</p>

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<p>PM me, I will be glad to help.</p>

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<p>PM me, and I’ll critique it :)</p>