Please Grade a extremely unique common app essay!

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<p>Hey, </p>

<p>If you could look over it and give me some corrections, ideas etc... that would be great! </p>

<p>I appreciate any kind of help!</p>

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<p>I will take a look.</p>

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<p>I’ll read it :)</p>

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<p>If you are still looking for readers, I will take a look.</p>

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<p>Hey, Anone123, </p>

<p>I’ll definitely take a look at your essay! :)</p>