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I have doubt in it.</p>
<p>anyway, the essay isn’t particularly that strong. maybe you should’ve used 2 examples instead of 3? first 2 examples were enough if you could add 3 more lines in each paragraph. the essay is 420+ words but it isn’t making any sort of strong points but the examples are pretty decent. but you will need to elaborate those.
some correct grammar usage and bit further description would give a double digit score. </p>
<p>the score will get a 8/9 from real essay reader from college board.</p>
<p>I am not sure though as essays aren’t my strongest part.</p>