Please grade my essay (out of 12 only, not on the 6 scale)

<p>I’d give you a 8. While your example was well explained, there was something missing. </p>

<p>You definitely should have added at least one more example.</p>

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<p>I had 4 paragraphs in mine (2 examples), and I got a 11.</p>