Please Grade This Essay!

<p>remember; in the actual exam, the examiners onli have 2min to grade one essay. (or was it 3?) Quick glance, neat, orderly, fluent, readable, okay thats a x/12.</p>

<p>8/12, i thought it was a little short, but being repetitive is a good thing i think. my essay was pretty repetitive and i got a 10. i think being repetitive stress the point across. i thought it was short and you aren't suppose to use "Oh", and also, you used personal experience instead of historical facts. so i think a 8-9/12 is alright for this. and all you guys maybe a ltitle too critical</p>