please HARSHLY judge my essay =]

<p>Can you please harshly judge my essay? =] (not that harsh of course...lol)
I'm applying early decision....so please :D</p>

<p>I’ll read it for you, send it over!</p>

<p>i’ll be happy to read it =)</p>

<p>I can read it. Just PM me :)</p>

<p>e-mail it to me at <a href="mailto:girlspanky@windowslive.com">girlspanky@windowslive.com</a> will be an honest critique :D</p>

<p>i’ll read it, pm me or email me <a href="mailto:lucyfchen@yahoo.com">lucyfchen@yahoo.com</a></p>

<p>I’ll give you feedback. PM!</p>

<p>PM it over and I’ll give feedback</p>