<p>Thank you for expanding on your previous claims, but I still feel your claim is a bit to self-aggrandizing. I can’t imagine you doing all that research and work single-handily, so be sure to denote that you worked in a team. If you actually did all this market research yourself, well, then congrats and I honestly find your work commendable. Get some proof and make sure your boss mentions it in his rec. </p>
<p>Other than that, your chances are looking good. You look like you’re a student that has taken full advantage of whatever opportunity that has been given to him, and then some.</p>
<p>BTW, how did you go about setting up your own non-profit? I’m trying to do something similar (a web based social movement) but it’s extremely difficult to get the word out.</p>