please help: common app transfer essay

Hi could you please take a look at my commonapp transfer essay?
If anyone, I’ll pm the essay

PROMPT: Please provide a statement that addresses your reasons for transferring and the objectives you hope to achieve. You can type directly into the box, or you can paste text from another source. (250-650 words)

anyone?

I can edit yours if you’ll edit mine! :slight_smile:

sure! let’s pm the essay?

I can help, too, if you haven’t already submitted!