Please help critique my essay! =)

Applying to College Common and Coalition Application
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<p>Hi!</p>

<p>I'm looking for someone to edit my common app essay...it's quite rough and I'm not really a great writer so I need help!</p>

<p>Anyone?</p>

<p>Thanks in advance!! <3</p>

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<p>I’ll help you out. PM me</p>