<p>Would any kind parents be willing to take a second and read my essay? I would love to have some input and constructive criticism on it before it gets sent off at the end of the week. </p>
<p>Its for a scholarship awarded on service and basically talks about how I started a community service project at school and its connections to my career goals. </p>
<p>pm me or reply to the thread please! I'd appreciate it</p>