<p>If anyone would like to edit my essay, I will PM it to you. It is 642 words and so I think I may need to cut it down (does that the common app has a limit of 600?) Also, the topic may be a little cliche, so i'm a little worried about whether or not I made the piece original enough. Also, it kind of tells two main stories, and I was wondering your opinion if maybe I should just stick with my second story and elaborate upon it. Thanks</p>
<p>hey i'll read it.</p>
<p>Ill read it too.</p>
<p>I'll help you.</p>