Please help me get into Georgia Tech by editing my essay!!!

College Essays
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<p>Okay, Georgia Tech is my first choice for college. I am in the magnet program for advanced studies in math, science, and technology down here in Georgia. My counselor and i thought i was going to be a shoe-in for GT until my SAT scores came in and i only got 1170/1690, and now i kinda worried if i going to get accepted. i do have a 3.7gpa and im black (didn't want to have to pull out the race card, but i think it could help me). So, during the break i finished my essay and i need someone to edit it. I am not going to lie the essay is pretty long with 752 words, and its about football. i think its a good story if you like sports and know a little something about football. Again, i would appreciate anyone who is willing to take on this challenge.</p>

<p>Again any help would seriously appreciated
Thanks!</p>

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<p>anyone??
please!</p>

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<p>.....bump!!</p>

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<p>Private Message me the essay and i will read it over and provide feedback. I need the question and word count to read the essay in context with what the college is looking for.</p>

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<p>well i kinda scared because you just joined the forum yesterday.. and made 48 posts in one day.</p>

<p>not trying to be picky , but just following the "sticky" the have posted here.</p>

<p>anyone else???</p>

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<p>....bump!!!!</p>

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<p>pm me...i'll read it.</p>