Please help me proof read my personal statement

<p>I'm currently working on my transfer application and writing my personal statement, if anyone has some free time, please help me proof read and improve my essay.</p>

<p>Please message me, thank you!</p>

<p>I will look at it!</p>

<p>I can look at it</p>

<p>Thank you very much, I just send private messages to you guys with my personal statement in it! :)</p>

<p>ill look at it too if you want! :)</p>

<p>Hey i got your message but for some apparent reason I cannot send it to you :frowning: so how do you want me to send it? Email? or would you mind if i posted it?</p>

<p>Same question for me. ^</p>

<p>Hey. I, also, am looking for someone to proofread my personal statement. I have been out of college for 8 years now and am applying to go back. </p>

<p>Thanks!!</p>

<p>sure msg me it…hopefully the msg thing works!!</p>

<p>beautifulchick95 : I apparently cannot private message you until I have done 15 posts!
boo! thanks anyways.</p>

<p>^^^ lol better get started posting!!!</p>