please help me read my dull and uninspired transfer essay

<p>about why i want to transfer</p>

<p>anyone want to help? i'll be your best friend :)</p>

<p>sure. i was accepted to cornell from a mediocre state school as a transfer for spring '10, so i can help you out.</p>

<p>e-mail it to <a href="mailto:ironicallyunsure@gmail.com">ironicallyunsure@gmail.com</a> if you want</p>

<p>YAY THANKS :D:D:D:D:D
anyone else?</p>

<p>Sure, I’ll help. Already submitted my cornell app.</p>

<p>I am a 2nd yr college student who applied for spring transfer too!
PM it over!</p>

<p>I will read it. PM me.</p>