Please help me with my supplement (Jan 1 deadline so it is urgent)

College Essays
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<p>So I am writing this supplement: Please write something about yourself that is not revealed through Common Application and Rec letters.</p>

<p>I wrote this one about my decision of not going to music school. Can anyone read mine and give me some feedbacks ?</p>

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<p>Can anyone help me ? It’s kinda urgent now</p>

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<p>i dont mind reading it. send it over</p>