Please help, this is so urgent. (essay review!!)

<p>I'm having so much trouble. Its for early decision and I have no one that can edit for me. Please critique and help me fix my grammar mistakes in this essay. </p>

<p>Please please please!</p>

<p>Ill be a critic. Just send it via pm.</p>

<p>Thank you so much! If anyone else wants to help, I would appreciate it so muchhh</p>

<p>I can help</p>

<p>anyone else?</p>

<p>I’ll help.</p>

<p>ill give you honest feedback. PM it to me</p>

<p>I may not be able to help you much with the topic itself, but I can check your grammar for you. PM it to me if you want.</p>

<p>Ill read it, PM it to me</p>

<p>I will read it as well. PM Me. I will PM you mine as well. Thanks!</p>

<p>any other helpers?</p>

<p>i’ll help. PM me</p>

<p>I’ll help. PM it.</p>

<p>anyone who can respond really quickly?</p>