<p>I have completed 2 questions of the UC essay. I can’t judge my own work so If anyone would like to read it please ask me. I would like you to critique it and tell me if it’s good or bad. Thanks!</p>
<p>sure, pm it to me</p>
<p>anybody else please wnat to take a look and evaluate it for me? I want to submit my application asap and I just want to get it reviewd</p>
<p>i look over it right quick</p>
<p>i will take a look</p>