<p>I'm very paranoid about my essay, and want to make sure I'm on the right track, so I was wondering, can anyone edit/critique my first short answer?
Oh and I would also appreciate any feedback on a possible essay topic for the common app that I thought of, although it is very......weird lol.
thanks</p>
<p>bumppppp…</p>
<p>sure, but im not a good editor! I’ll just help your paranoia by telling you my opinion =). oh and im '09.</p>