Please help with my "Why Pratt" essay. It's boring.

I dislike the word limit and I feel like I don’t have room to mention anything but academics in the essay. Could somebody read over my essay and give me suggestions for what I could remove?

Be careful who you send essays to on this site. I would suggest looking at the app mentr for help

I can read it over – a current Pratt sophomore.

This is a terrible idea. Don’t send you essay to a stranger. Show your English teacher!