Please Help with this College App Essay!

It is ultra ultra rough right now and might be totally off from what I should do(prompt wise) but I figured sacrificing my literary honor and posting my terrible first draft here would be more productive than staring at the page and figuring out what to do. Any help would be greatly appreciated, thank you! Ask me to PM you.

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Thanks!

Anyone else want to help? pleaaase!

I’ll help you. Can you also read and provide feedback on my essay? Thank you s much!

Sure! PM me! I’ll PM you