Please help with this essay...

Applying to College
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<p>I would appreciate some feedback on this essay (the common app long essay), thanks. Please PM if you could help</p>

<p>Oh, and I have another question: I worked as a paid election worker this year, but the job was only for 14 hours on one day. Should I list this as work experience on my apps?</p>

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<p>. b.u.m.p .</p>

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<p>I'll look at it</p>

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<p>i'lll read</p>

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<p>ill read it</p>

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<p>Read. Read.</p>

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<p>i'll read it</p>

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<p>I'll be happy to read it.</p>

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<p>i'll read. and yea, put 14 hours / week (since they only ask about hrs per week) and 1 week total.</p>

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<p>i ll read it!!!!</p>