<p>please go here and save my life....err....critique my essay i mean. please offer helpful advice as to how to cut it down....thank you!</p>
<p>I just read ur essay and its fantastic. If u didn't say there was a limit on the # of words, I wouldn't change anything, but since u have to, here are some suggestions. I would just try to skim a few of the longer sentences. The detail is really good, but some might be unneccesary, if u just try to clip some of the extra info. i think you'll get down to the suggested limit.</p>
<p>ahh thank you for your help jmac~!</p>