<p>I would like some feedback on my college application essay for the common app. Would someone like to read my essay and provide me with their input? I'll trust that you are honest.</p>
<p>Thanks
Kelly</p>
<p>Kelly: your trust is admirable but read the warning post about handing out your essays. 1) people aren't always sincere -- they may be your competition. 2) people aren't always who they say they are.</p>
<p>With that, best of luck to you.</p>