PLEASE. I need feedback on my Georgetown SFS essay.

Okay so Georgetown is legit my dream school. I’ve already finished my common App personal statement (I’d say it is pretty good), and now I’m completing the supplements for Georgetown.

Here is the prompt: APPLICANTS TO THE WALSH SCHOOL OF FOREIGN SERVICE: Briefly discuss a current global issue, indicating why you consider it important and what you suggest should be done to deal with it.

If someone would be willing to give suggestions, I’d be forever grateful.

PM me. I’m only a HS student applying to Georgetown College, not a pro essay reader, but another opinion can’t hirt.

PM me

You can PM me if you like.

Same here @SonOfAbraham , also just applying as a HS student to Georgetown (not SFS).

I’d love to read it though.

You can PM me also

PM me, I wouldn’t mind giving it a read.

Hey, you can PM me and I’ll read it and give feedback

I can read it, have a couple friends at Georgetown so I know generally what might help (PM me)