Please, I need someone to read/edit my essay!

<p>Can someone please read and edit my common app essay? I'd love feedback before I submit the application for my dream/reach school! If you're interested, I will pm you the essay! Thanks so much :D</p>

<p>I would love to take a look at it :)</p>

<p>Thank you so much! I’ll pm it now :).</p>