<p>This is my essay for the CommonApp. Tell me whats wrong with it. I really dont mind the criticism. PM me for a copy.</p>
<p>I'll look at it</p>
<p>ill check it out if you pm me w/ in 5 minutes... I have to get back to hw</p>
<p>we should exchange essays.</p>
<p>ok
just pm me</p>
<p>i'll take a look at it if you want</p>
<p>sure, i'll take a look, and give feedback asap</p>
<p>pm me</p>
<p>i'll read it too if you want</p>
<p>I will give feedback. I'm a transfer applicant, which means I won't be competing against you in the admissions process in the event that we are applying to the same schools.</p>
<p>ill read it.</p>
<p>i'll read it and give you feedback</p>
<p>you welcome</p>
<p>PM me or email: <a href="mailto:moveburner125@gmail.com">moveburner125@gmail.com</a></p>
<p>okay, another member that appears too eager to read other's essays. Very suspicious.</p>
<p>sure pm it over</p>
<p>I'll read it if you need more feedback. It looks like you have a lot of willing volunteers already, but if you want more, PM me with it and I'd be happy to read :P</p>
<p>i'll read it</p>
<p>I'll read it. pm me...</p>
<p>I'll read it too, if you want. PM me.</p>