Please look over my UC essay! Thanks!

<p>The essay is for the second UC prompt which reads: Tell us about a personal quality, talent, accomplishment, contribution or experience that is important to you. What about this quality or accomplishment makes you proud and how does it relate to the person you are?</p>

<p>I just want to know if it's decent or not or even on the right track. </p>

<p>Please PM me if you are interested and I will send it to you! Thanks again!</p>