Please please critique my essay!

<p>I have written a fairly <em>imaginative</em> essay for the common application, but I'm not sure if I hit the marks. </p>

<p>I'm planning on sending it over as part of my application to:
--Harvard
--Yale
--Duke
--U. Toronto
--McGill
--some other less well-known schools.</p>

<p>Is anyone willing to give it some comments? Please?</p>

<p>Thank you!</p>

<p>I'll critique it. Send it over!</p>

<p>Oh, BTW, I'm applying for class of 2013. So, if you don't think it appropriate... that's OK. :)</p>

<p>i'd look at it. pm me. I'm working on my own essay right now-400 words in. So hard to finish!</p>

<p>Thank you both!</p>

<p>I will PM my essay to you shortly (once I finish editing it for the 20984198273021th time, I swear...)</p>

<p>I'll read it. I'm class of '09 but not applying to your top schools. Only since you said please twice in the title though...</p>

<p>I'll be glad to look at it.</p>

<p>yo send it over</p>

<p>send it on over</p>

<p>pm me for some really good, analytical editing. :)</p>

<p>Thank you guys very much!</p>

<p>I am currently doing some last-minute structural check-ups, and I will PM it ASAP.</p>

<p>Thank you for your comments! :D</p>

<p>I would be glad to look over it.</p>

<p>I too love to read it.Thanks</p>

<p>send me a pm i can help</p>

<p>Send it over~ I'll like to brush up on my critiquing skillz. (:</p>

<p>could u send me a copy ?</p>

<p>id be happy to look, pm</p>

<p>i'll try to critique it and give suggestions
pm me</p>

<p>i can give my opinion if u want</p>

<p>pm me and i will critique it harshly</p>