<p>Im panicking, the ED deadline is soon and my essay is totally horrible. I gave it to ppl to read and they sed it was over the top and didnt give a sense of who i was. SOMEBODY PLEASE read it and tell me what changes should be made or should i start over....PLS! </p>
<p>i guess no 08'ers....and pls onli ppl who know that they're doing...</p>
<p>pls help! bump~</p>
<p>i'm an 08'er, but i can help if you'd like. I've critiqued many an essay in my day, and i can safely say that i'm no dud when it comes to writing.</p>
<p>I consider myself pretty good at writing and i am no rookie at criticizing- So if you feel comfortable with it Pm your essay.however i can't really promise any drastic changes , i'll help as much as i can</p>
<p>Regards,
Emaad</p>
<p>Send it to me. I'll take a look at it. I work with lots of high schoolers on their essays.</p>
<p>Still needing readers! Essay is revised and should not be so bad anymore, dunno though...help guys I'm applying ED...</p>
<p>bump~~~~~~</p>
<p>pm me, i can help you</p>
<p>still need readers! this essay is going to some ivies~!</p>