please proofread an essay ASAP

Colleges & Universities A-Z Cornell University
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please proofread this essay that i’ve read and tell me what you think about ASAP.
help will be terribly appreciated.

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I can read it. Am a parent.

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@CorpusChristi have pmed please check

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I am willing to, I already submitted my app!

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I’d be happy to as well. I applied ED

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sent to both

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@cck11223 I’ll look at it. I was accepted ED.

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@cck11223 which college within Cornell are you focusing on? I can help if you’re ILR.