<p>Please read and correct my commonapp essay
Tell me if there's anything wrong with the ideas or the flow or whatever.
I'm feeling so not confident about that essay.
And I'm poor so I can't really pay for professional proofreaders.
$100 a paper.. are you serious?!
THANK YOU!</p>
<p>I’ll give it a read and I’ll give my feedback 
PM me?</p>
<p>God bless you jobravo.</p>