Please proofread my Yale essay?

<p>I really would like some feedback.
I'd be eternally grateful if you could lol</p>

<p>PM me, dude. I’d be happy to help. As for the “eternally grateful” part . . . ehh.</p>

<p>I’ll take a read :slight_smile: Pm me!</p>

<p>Sure PM me!</p>

<p>Feel free to PM me.</p>

<p>I’ll take a read as well and offer you feedback! :)</p>

<p>I’ll also read!</p>

<p>PM I gotcha</p>