Please proofread my Yale supplement!

Colleges and Universities A-Z Yale University
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<p>My essay starts out well but sort of sucks in the end. Please give me advice to make it better.</p>

<p>Please PM or comment on this thread if you would like to proofread my supplement.</p>

<p>Thanks! :D</p>

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<p>bummmmmp 10 char!</p>

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<p>PM me if you want. although in the interest of full disclosure ill tell you that I’m applying to yale too.</p>

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<p>I can read it. I’ve already sent my application in.</p>

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<p>thanks!</p>

<p>more readers would be nice btw!</p>