Please Read and Comment on my essay.

Hey y’all! I have just finished writing my college admissions essay, and since CC users are top notch, I thought you guys could be a ton of help!
The essay is off of ApplyTexas, Essay B: tell about a conflict and what you learned (summarized).
If you are interested PM me and I’ll message you about it! And if you would like, I will gladly read and of your essays you would like help on! Thank you!!!