Please read and critique my application essay; I have no one else to help me with it.

<p>The essay topic is: Describe a circumstance, obstacle or conflict in your life, and the skills and resources you used to resolve it. Did it change you? If so, how?</p>

<p>I was trying to use this as my chance to tell them my story but I feel like I did that a little too much and did not fully answer the question and or stay on the topic of the question. What do you guys think? Am I on topic with the question the whole time? Do I answer the question fully?</p>

<p>PM me for my essay.</p>

<p>I can read it for you. I sent you a PM.</p>

<p>Sure, I’ll give you my feedback :)</p>

<p>I’ll help review it! :D</p>