Please read and critique my Yale essay!

College Essays
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<p>Please read and critique my Yale essay! Be brutal!</p>

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<p>ill critique it for u.</p>

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<p>send it over. I will comment</p>

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<p>send it ! I'll comment too :)</p>

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<p><-
if you want :p</p>

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<p>Send it over!!</p>

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<p>send it over, if ud like</p>

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<p>PM me if you wish</p>

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<p>Pm me too !!!</p>

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<p>I would be glad to help.</p>

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<p>ill read, send it over</p>

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<p>i'll take a look at it</p>

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<p>very good i must say........Deep, thougtful, and abstract. I could not find any errors and i believe my feedback would make ur essay worse. Good luck.</p>

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<p>I'll read it for you..</p>

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<p>Pm me, i ll feed back if i can</p>

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<p>Send it over. :)
Ill give feedback.</p>

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<p>Send it to me, I'll read it</p>

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<p>-raises hand and waits patiently-</p>

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<p>send it over ill critique</p>

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<p>I am an '09er, but I am not applying to Yale. Send it over. I will try to give you some feedbacks.</p>