<p>I've finally edited this down from 650 words. So any takers? I'd really appreciate it! =]</p>
<p>yes, but you have to read mine to ;D</p>
<p>ok cool, i'll pm it to you</p>
<p>I'd be happy to read it... if you’re worried about people stealing your essay feel free to email me at my school account... but i would prefer a pm</p>
<p><a href="mailto:sxkamboj@ucdavis.edu">sxkamboj@ucdavis.edu</a></p>
<p>thanks!</p>
<p>anyone else?</p>
<p>bump......</p>
<p>i'll take a look at it!</p>
<p>I will read and critique it just pm me.</p>
<p>I can read it and make suggestions if you want.</p>
<p>buuuummmmp</p>
<p>bump again...</p>
<p>mine is 878 :</p>
<p>ill read urs if ull read mine :)</p>