Please read/edit my essay

Hi, I have a draft of my common app essay ready, and I would appreciate if someone could take a look at it. I’m planning on applying to some prestigious schools (Stanford, Columbia, etc.) so please do not refrain from criticism! Be as honest as you can. Only people who are completely done with the common app process please

If you would like -my son and I would be glad to read your essay (son was admitted to an ivy this year) … send it to us via private message… never good idea to post it openly on internet bc schools run them through plagiarism software… luckily your link is blank so your prob ok…

inb4 runswimyoga gives you horrible feedback in attempt to ruin your chances and improve their son’s who has not been admitted yet and they lied…

I’ll take a look at it if you want. PM me. (I’m a teacher.)

I’d be happy to take a look at your essay. PM me a copy. Are you looking for any specific feedback?

I can read it and give feedback if you’d like!! let me know!