please read my 150 word ACTIVITY Essay!

<p>i just need more of an overall feel towards it. yay or nay. also, any suggestions of lines to take out.
thanks.</p>

<p>just reply, and i'll pm you.</p>

<p>sure, i'll read it. its the commonapp one right?</p>

<p>yes, thanks so much. i'll pm you.</p>

<p>send it over...</p>

<p>PM it if you need another reader :)</p>

<p>sure! just PM it on over</p>

<p>PM me! and i’d love to read it.</p>

<p>I’ll read it!</p>

<p>I would love to read it. Please pm me.</p>

<p>I’ll take a look PM me</p>

<p>you realize this is from 7 months ago!</p>