please read my admissions essay?

College Essays
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<p>Hello!
I need a few people to read, correct and give me feedback on my admissions essay. If you could help me I would really appreciate it because my english teacher wasn't helpful at all!
Thanks a lot,
Emma</p>

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<p>i will if you want!</p>

3

<p>I will too! you can PM me :)</p>

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<p>u can send it to me too if u want</p>

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<p>may i read?!</p>

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<p>I’ll read it too.Just send it :)</p>

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<p>I’ll read it if you want! =)</p>

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<p>I can read and help you edit it</p>