<p>Prompt: Write an essay in which you tell us about someone who has made an impact on your life and explain how and why this person is important to you.</p>
<p>The essay isn't about a specific person, more about an event. Could someone read it and tell me how i can make it go more with the prompt? I really like this essay and would love to use it. If anyone would like to read it ill PM you it. Thanks Everyone!</p>