please read my awkward essay

<p>well there are two... only about 250 words each
one's really "awkward" and the other is.. not? </p>

<p>they are for u.va so i'd prefer if readers were not applying there :)
any feedback would be nice.</p>

<p>i'll take a look</p>

<p>I'll look.</p>

<p>not applying to UvA. PM me</p>

<p>I'll read it if you want</p>

<p>i would like to announce that this thread is closed? lol
thanks again to those who helped me out IOU</p>