Please read my Common App essay (prompt 3)

College Essays
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Could someone please proofread/provide feedback on my Common App essay? I wrote on the third prompt (challenging a belief). It’s already been through a couple stages of revision, but I’d really appreciate any comments from a few other readers’ perspectives.

Oh, and I’d really prefer to send my essay only to people who’ve already been through the college application process. :slight_smile:

If you’d be willing to read it, please PM me or comment here. Thanks so much!

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I could read it :slight_smile:

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I can☺

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Bump :slight_smile:

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I could read it!!

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I want to read it too

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I’ll read it:)

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Pm it to me

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^ at all posters above (and to anyone else who may be reading this):

Thanks so much for reaching out, but please, no current high school seniors – I know most of you are perfectly nice and trustworthy people, but I don’t want to run the risk of having someone come along and plagiarize my essays :stuck_out_tongue: Sorry, and thanks :slight_smile:

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I’ll read it, I’m going into gap year so you’re fine