<p>Common app essay---
Would anyone be willing to give me some feedback on my Essay?
I can Pm it to you, I really would like some criticism or objective views on what i can redo or what my mistakes are. </p>
<p>I am willing to swap and critique another in exchange</p>
<p>Well, I gather that you want to get into MIT? I am a parent and I got my BSEE degree in engineering as well as an MBA degree. </p>
<p>I can’t write to save my life but I surely am very critical. If you like you can PM me your essay. :-)</p>
<p>Pm me:) </p>
<p>I will look</p>
<p>I’ll be happy to take a look. Send it over to: rosharma38@ymail(dot)com
Also, would you mind critiquing mine for me? I got rejected cornell ed and am trying to fix my essays before rd.</p>
<p>PM me 
I will help with yours. If possible can you read mine as well?</p>
<p>send me a pm</p>
<p>Same PM it over and I’ll help you read it!</p>
<p>Exchange with me. Send it via PM and I’ll send mine.</p>
<p>Send it to me. Can you look over my CMU essay?</p>