Please read my Common App Essay?

Applying to College Common and Coalition Application
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<p>Could someone read my Common Application essay?
I would love to hear general feedback and any constructive criticism.
Thank you!</p>

<p>Topic: Evaluate a significant experience, achievement, risk you have taken, or ethical dilemma you have faced and its impact on you.</p>

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<p>i’ll read it! i could use some inspiration. my email is gcpoeticpunker@**********</p>

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<p>whoops. it won’t let me write ********** … g m a i l . c o m</p>